CommentsYay, a critique!
What you mean by the screen cutting from one side to another is when it switches backgrounds, yes? That was mainly because of lack of time, but I see what you mean, it interrupts the visual flow. And I think that I get what you meant by the line in the portal. I love well written critiques, thank you! |
The only less-positive things I have to say aren't very big--the emote is still wonderful as is. I think that when the emote walks to the car, when the screen cuts from one side to the other, it's a little too quick, not as smooth. Same when the emote is in the car and he starts driving and the screen cuts again. I think if it scrolled, it would be a lot smoother. Again, it's a minor detail. Another, even more minor thing is that when the car goes into the portal, there's a straight line where it disappears. It might look better if instead of the straight line, the inner edge of the portal is where it disappears. [I have no idea if you understand what I mean...am I making sense?]
This is a fantastic little emote. Great job. <3