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I've gotta say, this is adorable. The emote's expression is super cute--he looks so happy! And the bouncing motion is very smooth. Great job with that, especially with the shadow. I also love the up-and-down movement of the car when it moves and how it shakes when it starts. The pixelling of everything is great, especially the car and the background. I also love the animation of the emote entering the car--that's a little detail I know I would have missed. Same with the exhaust fumes. I love all the detail you put in, both with the animation and with the pixelling.

The only less-positive things I have to say aren't very big--the emote is still wonderful as is. I think that when the emote walks to the car, when the screen cuts from one side to the other, it's a little too quick, not as smooth. Same when the emote is in the car and he starts driving and the screen cuts again. I think if it scrolled, it would be a lot smoother. Again, it's a minor detail. Another, even more minor thing is that when the car goes into the portal, there's a straight line where it disappears. It might look better if instead of the straight line, the inner edge of the portal is where it disappears. [I have no idea if you understand what I mean...am I making sense?]

This is a fantastic little emote. Great job. <3
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`SanguineEpitaph Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, a critique! :happybounce: Thank you so much. <3

What you mean by the screen cutting from one side to another is when it switches backgrounds, yes? That was mainly because of lack of time, but I see what you mean, it interrupts the visual flow. :nod:

And I think that I get what you meant by the line in the portal. :D I guess that's something I didn't think of, but thanks for the input. <3

I love well written critiques, thank you! :D :D :D
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:iconeastsidesunsets:
You're welcome. <3 It was my first critique, I hope it was good!

Yeah, that's exactly what I mean for both of them. I'm glad I made sense.

It was my pleasure! <3
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`SanguineEpitaph Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It was very good! :heart:
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